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		<title>Bending Straws</title>
		<description>Discuss Bending Straws</description>
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			<title>Katie says:</title>
			<link>https://greenplace.at/15-bending-straws#comment-20</link>
			<description><![CDATA[You can sense that there's something interesting going on here. I wish I knew what the narrator's relationship with James was (commanding officer, sibling, friend, lover?) to deepen the impact of the last line.]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Katie</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Thu, 04 Apr 2019 23:04:27 +0200</pubDate>
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			<title>Christine says:</title>
			<link>https://greenplace.at/15-bending-straws#comment-19</link>
			<description><![CDATA[I very much like the idea of this story and the way it works with the prompt. I would have liked to see the narrator take a more active role - it would have made a more complete plot arc.]]></description>
			<dc:creator>Christine</dc:creator>
			<pubDate>Thu, 04 Apr 2019 22:04:41 +0200</pubDate>
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