After years of talking on the phone and chatting online, he would finally see her in person. When he arrived, the service was not yet over, the casket still open.
It is never too late. Unless never is now.
After years of talking on the phone and chatting online, he would finally see her in person. When he arrived, the service was not yet over, the casket still open.
It is never too late. Unless never is now.
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I wonder if there might be a way to save the surprise to closer to the end, maybe by moving that sentence to the end?
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